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Titel: He's Famous, I'm not.
Språk: Engelska
Typ av text: Fanfiction
Antal kapitel hittills: 2
Färdigskriven: Nej
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Beskrivning: Handlar om en ung tjej i Gryffindors elevehem som blir förälskad i en av skolans skojjare, Sirius Black. Hon har aldrig blivit sedd av folk, hon är en som är väldigt utstött, & ingen märker henne. Det är både därför att hon vill det & att hennes mor (som är en Slytherin) lade en trollformel över henne som gör henne nästan osynlig för folk.

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Ja, gillar ni idéen så skriver jag första kapitlet C: hope you like it!
Och om jag failr på engelskan under skrivandet ber jag om ursäkt..

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9 nov, 2011 21:43

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Kan inte läsa om den är engelsk, tyvärr.

9 nov, 2011 21:49

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Kan inte läsa om den är engelsk, tyvärr.


aw.. va synd kanske ändrar till svenska då.. xD

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9 nov, 2011 21:55

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Skriv!

9 nov, 2011 21:57

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Okej Börjar skriva på första kapitlet nu C:
blir på engelska c:

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Prologue.

"Kathrine!!! Hurry up, the cars from the Ministry is arriving soon, and I want you to be ready in 5 minutes, so HURRY UP" I heard my mom's voice calling from down the stairs.
My room was at the third floor in the house, a magical house in London and a quite small one if I have to say so. I had my suitcase on my bed and I packed down everything, and then I called
for my own owl, Louie. A big proud horned owl, and my only friend I've ever had. I put him gently in his cage before I closed my suitcase and took it in my left hand, and then took
Louie in my other hand and walked down the stairs. Damn it, it was so heavy. I shot a quick glance at my own face in the mirror on the staircase. I was a normal long girl, with brown shoulder
long hair with a fringe. My eyes were brown and soft, but sometimes with a hint of other colours. My face was heartshaped and soft, but otherwise I was a quite skinny girl. I didn't have much
muscle strength, but I didn't bother. I got down the stairs and saw my tall mom look at me with a look of disappointment. She had always been disappointed in me, since I was so like my dad,
who barely ever was home. But when he was, we had a great time and mom was more kind. The worst part about it, that my mom and dad was from different dormitorys. Mom from Slytherin (which she
really wanted me to go in, but that didn't happen) and dad from Gryffindor. It was odd, since I had heard that Slytherins and Gryffindors rarely got along among them. But then I didn't have more time to think about that,
before mom took my collar and almost dragged me out of the house to the car..

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9 nov, 2011 21:58

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Gillar idén, bra början! Vill gärna ha en fortsättning.

It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.

10 nov, 2011 09:46

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Chapter One: Back to school, back to being alone.

I had just gotten inside the train with my suitcase and owl, and I found an empty cabin and I closed the door after me. Then I put the bag up on the shelf and I put Louie on the seat next to me
so that I could stroke him a bit now and then. No one walked into the cabin, people walked by but I were left alone as usual, I didn't really bother about it anymore, since I was quite used to it.
So during the long ride I just sat there and then I changed into the robe. I was in Gryffindor, which my mom was very disappointed about, but I was feeling comfortable there. Even though I was
kind of just, ignored by everyone. After a long time we finally arrived to the Hogsmeade station and I took my things and walked down the hall after everyone, then i walked to the closest carrige
and got in, after a while 4 guys got in too, which was very odd. So I squeezed myself into the corner and looked out the window. But I saw their reflection in the window, and I saw who it was.
It was Remus Lupin, Peter Pettigrew, Sirius Black and James Potter. Sirius and James were pretty famous, just because they were always around doing mischief and laughing. They showed off quite
a lot, or at least James with the Golden Snitch. They didn't look at me but I looked at them through the window, and when I were just about to look away from Sirius he looked straight at me in
reflection in the window, he kept looking straight into my eyes for about 3 seconds, and then he looked away. He couldn't have seen me, I thought for myself. Or did he? It surely looked like it.
I bit my lip a bit and thought about it, he had to have been looking at me, because why would he look straight at the place where my eye reflection would be and stay looking there for a while.

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10 nov, 2011 20:46

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Kan bli bra ! Men försök att dela in texten í stycken. blir enklare att läsa då !

Wan't some more!

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11 nov, 2011 15:28

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Goodie, goodie!

11 nov, 2011 20:38

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Förlåt för att jag inte skrivit! jag har varit sjuk så jag har aldrig orkat vara inne >n<

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Chapter Two: The Great Hall.

All of the old students had just walked into the big hall and taken their seats. I sat closest to the big door, and alone. Kinda. I don't know why but it felt like there were less people here on
The Gryffindore table than last year, or maybe they just sat so close so I would sit like 1 meter away from them. I sighed and just looked down at the table and I almost ignored the headmasters
speach that he had every year, and this was my third year so I knew kind of what he was saying. But I looked up anyways for some reason after a while and as my eyes looked their way up to the
teachers table somethign caught my eye. Those four guys from the carrige where looking in my direction, I wonder what mischief they were up to. But it seemed like Black were trying to make the
others see something, and right now he were trying to make Remus Lupin see something. I looked at him with a slight frown, I saw how Sirius pointed in my direction and then he took his hands over
Remus eyes, then he took them away, and Remus looked straight into my eyes for barely one second. What on earth..? Then I decided to look away again and the food appeared. I ate a bit, but not
much at all really. Then, when we had gotten dinner and dessert we were finally allowed to leave the Great Hall. I was the first one to get up from the Gryffindor table, and I hurried out.
I was the first one to get to the big lady's painting, and then right after me came the prefects with the new first years. And I let them go in first, then I followed after them. Then I decided
to sit down in the corner on my favourite chair, alone and comfy. There I sat for a while and looked into the fire with tired eyes. Then I accidentaly fell asleep.

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17 nov, 2011 07:10

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